Lesson 29 - Day 4 - Revision & Editing | Exploring Mars | 5th Grade Language Arts

Lesson Map

Identify and explain the goal of the Mars Exploration Rover Mission and why it was important.

The Mighty... pp. 1–7

Standards

RI.5.3RI.5.8

Explain how Steve's proposals for missions were different from previous missions to Mars and what problem he was trying to solve.

Materials

The Mighty... pp. 8–13

Standards

RI.5.3

Lesson

Explain why it took three years for Steve's team to create the rovers, and describe the steps the team took to ensure the rover was ready for a trip to Mars.

Materials

The Mighty... pp. 14–19

Standards

RI.5.3

Lesson

Explain what the team did to prepare the rovers for the trip and why they were worried.

Materials

The Mighty... pp. 20–23

Standards

RI.5.3

Lesson

Language

Use the perfect verb tense to show when events occurred.

Materials

Caption This! Worksheet (G5, Alt U4, L5)

Standards

L.5.1.bL.5.1.c

Lesson

Explain the steps necessary for Spirit's landing and why each step was important.

Materials

The Mighty... — pp. 24–27, 29

Standards

L.5.1.bRI.5.3

Lesson

Use details from the sidebars to revise and add additional information about the steps necessary for Spirit’s landing and operation.

Materials

The Mighty... — pages 28 and 30

Standards

L.5.1.bRI.5.2RI.5.3SL.5.2W.5.9

Lesson

Describe where Opportunity landed, what Opportunity found, and how the team responded to Opportunity's findings.

Materials

The Mighty... pp. 31–33

Standards

L.5.1.bRI.5.3

Lesson

Writing

2 days

Overview

Write informational paragraphs that include a topic sentence and direct quotations to show understanding of a topic.

Day 1 - Brainstorming

Use different sentence types to craft engaging topic sentences.

Materials

Brainstorming Page 1 (G5, Alt U4, L9)
Two Paragraph Outline
Brainstorming Page 1 Sample Response (G5, Alt U4, L9)
Two Paragraph Outline Sample Response (G5, Alt U4, L9)

Standards

SL.5.1W.5.2W.5.2.aW.5.2.bW.5.2.eW.5.5

Day 2 - Drafting

Support main ideas by including relevant direct quotations.

Materials

Brainstorming Page 1 (G5, Alt U4, L9) — Completed on Day 1
Two Paragraph Outline — Completed on Day 1

Standards

SL.5.1W.5.2W.5.2.aW.5.2.bW.5.2.eW.5.5

Lesson

Describe the different accomplishments made by Spirit and Opportunity and what made the accomplishments possible.

Materials

The Mighty... — pp. 34–37, 39

Standards

L.5.1.bRI.5.3

Lesson

Use details from the sidebars to revise and add additional information about the different accomplishments made by Spirit and Opportunity and what made the accomplishments possible.

Materials

The Mighty... — page 38 and sidebar on page 39

Standards

L.5.1.bRI.5.3

Lesson

Writing

4 days

Overview

Write a poem that tells the story of exploring another planet from the perspective of one of the rovers, using details from the unit text.

Day 1 - Brainstorming

Brainstorm a theme, events, and key words before writing a poem.

Materials

Poetry Brainstorming Template (G5, Alt U4, L12)
Poetry Brainstorming Sample Response (G5, Alt U4, L12)
Poetry Brainstorming Mentor Response (G5, Alt U4, L12)

Standards

W.5.3W.5.3.aW.5.3.dW.5.5

Day 2 - Drafting

Use rhyme to add meaning, tone, and beauty to a poem.

Materials

Poetry Brainstorming Template (G5, Alt U4, L12) — Completed on Day 1

Standards

W.5.3W.5.3.aW.5.3.bW.5.3.dW.5.5

Day 3 - Drafting (continued)

Use figurative language to add meaning, tone, and beauty to a poem.

Materials

Poetry Brainstorming Template (G5, Alt U4, L12) — Completed on Day 1

Standards

L.5.5.aW.5.3W.5.3.aW.5.3.bW.5.3.dW.5.5

Day 4 - Revision & Editing

Use commas and punctuation to support the rhythm and meaning of a poem.

Standards

L.5.1.bL.5.1.cL.5.2W.5.5

Lesson

Explain what evidence the author includes to support the idea that math is a critical component of space exploration and engineering.

Materials

The Mighty... pp. 40–45

Standards

L.5.1.bRI.5.3RI.5.8

Lesson

Language

Use verb tenses to accurately convey time or the sequence of events.

Materials

Time Traveler Activity Cards (G5, Alt U4, L13)

Standards

L.5.1.c

Lesson

Discussion

Debate and analyze unit Essential Questions.

Materials

The Mighty...

Standards

SL.5.1SL.5.3W.5.2

Lesson

Writing

2 days

Overview

Synthesize and analyze details in order to deepen understanding of a topic.

Day 1 - Planning

Use different sentence types to craft engaging topic sentences.

Materials

Discussion Brainstorming Page 1 (G5, Alt U4, L15) — Completed during Lesson 15
Discussion Brainstorming Page 1 Sample Response (G5, Alt U4, L16)
Two Paragraph Outline
Two Paragraph Outline Sample Response (G5, Alt U4, L16)

Standards

SL.5.1W.5.2W.5.2.aW.5.2.bW.5.2.eW.5.5

Day 2 - Drafting

Include the most relevant part of a quotation to support the main ideas.

Materials

Two Paragraph Outline — Completed on Day 1
Discussion Brainstorming Page 1 (G5, Alt U4, L15) — Completed during Lesson 15
Discussion Brainstorming Page 1 Sample Response (G5, Alt U4, L16)

Standards

SL.5.1W.5.2W.5.2.aW.5.2.bW.5.2.eW.5.5

Lesson

Analyze the importance of the sun for Spirit's survival and the steps scientists took to ensure Spirit had access to the sun.

Materials

The Mighty... pp. 46–51

Standards

L.5.1.cRI.5.3

Lesson

Summarize "Mars Rovers Advance Understanding of the Red Planet."

Materials

“Mars Rovers Advance Understanding of the Red Planet”

Standards

L.5.1.cRI.5.2RI.5.3

Lesson

Summarize by explaining the relationship between two or more scientific and technical ideas.

Materials

The Mighty... pp. 52–55

Standards

L.5.1.cRI.5.2RI.5.3

Lesson

Use details from the articles to revise and add additional information about the challenges Opportunity faced when approaching Victoria Crater.

Materials

“Rover Team Tests Mars Moves on Earth”
“NASA's Opportunity Rover Rolls Free on Mars”

Standards

L.5.1.cRI.5.2RI.5.3RI.5.9

Lesson

Analyze the strategies Elizabeth Rusch uses to make science feel like an adventure by explaining how authors use word choice, language, and point of view to support particular points in a text.

Materials