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Lesson Overview
Objective
Revise the climax by adding descriptive details that build tension and reveal the narrator's thoughts, feelings, and actions.
Readings and Materials
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Book: The Watsons Go to Birmingham—1963 by Christopher Paul Curtis
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Book: White Water by Michael S. Bandy and Eric Stein; illustrated by Shadra Stickland
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Resource: Narrative Graphic Organizer (G6–8)
Lesson Map
3 days
Write a paragraph that makes and supports a clear claim.
- TWGTB
- Single Point Paragraph Writing Rubric (G6, U1)
- Brainstorming Page (G6, U1, L5)
- Sample Brainstorming Page (G6, U1, L5)
- Single Paragraph Outline
- Claim Practice Page (G6, U1, L5)
- Sample Outline and Sample Paragraph (G6, U1, L5)
Generate ideas and write a clear claim that fully answers the prompt.
- TWGTB
- Single Point Paragraph Writing Rubric (G6, U1)
- Sample Brainstorming Page (G6, U1, L5)
- Sample Brainstorming Page (G6, U1, L5)
- Single Paragraph Outline
- Claim Practice Page (G6, U1, L5)
Standards
L.6.3.aW.6.1W.6.1.a
Create a single paragraph outline.
- TWGTB
- Brainstorming Page (G6, U1, L12)
- Sample Brainstorming Page (G6, U1, L12)
- Single Paragraph Outline
Standards
W.6.1W.6.1.b
Draft a complete paragraph that includes a claim, supporting details, an explanation, and a concluding sentence.
- TWGTB
- Single Point Paragraph Writing Rubric (G6, U1)
- Single Paragraph Outline
- Sample Outline and Sample Paragraph (G6, U1, L5)
Standards
W.6.1.aW.6.1.b
2 days
Write a paragraph that makes and supports a clear claim.
- TWGTB
- “Mother to Son”
- Single Point Paragraph Writing Rubric (G6, U1)
- Brainstorming Page (G6, U1, L12)
- Sample Brainstorming Page (G6, U1, L12)
- Single Paragraph Outline
- Pronouns Reference Sheet (G6–8)
Draft a paragraph that includes strong explanations of how the evidence supports the claim.
- TWGTB
- “Mother to Son”
- Brainstorming Page (G6, U1, L12)
- Sample Brainstorming Page (G6, U1, L12)
- Single Paragraph Outline
Standards
W.6.1W.6.1.aW.6.1.b
Revise and edit a paragraph by intentionally replacing repeated nouns with pronouns and correcting errors in pronoun case.
- TWGTB
- “Mother to Son”
- Single Point Paragraph Writing Rubric (G6, U1)
- Pronouns Reference Sheet (G6–8)
Standards
L.6.1.aW.6.5
5 days
Write a personal narrative that conveys the significance of an important experience in the writer's life through description and reflection.
- TWGTB
- White Water
- Narrative Writing Rubric (G6)
- Single Point Narrative Writing Rubric (G6, U1, L20)
- Narrative Graphic Organizer (G6–8)
- Sample Narrative Graphic Organizer (G6, U1, L20)
- Mentor Text Narrative Arc (G6, U1, L20)
- Pronouns Reference Sheet (G6–8)
- Plot Structure Reference Sheet (G6–8)
- Editing Checklist (G6–8)
Select an important experience to write about and plan the setting, characters, and plot for a personal narrative.
- TWGTB
- White Water
- Narrative Graphic Organizer (G6–8)
- Sample Narrative Graphic Organizer (G6, U1, L20)
- Mentor Text Narrative Arc (G6, U1, L20)
- Plot Structure Reference Sheet (G6–8)
Standards
W.6.3W.6.3.a
Draft a beginning that introduces the reader to a clear setting, narrator, and conflict.
- TWGTB
- White Water
- Single Point Narrative Writing Rubric (G6, U1, L20)
- Narrative Graphic Organizer (G6–8)
- Sample Narrative Graphic Organizer (G6, U1, L20)
- Mentor Text Narrative Arc (G6, U1, L20)
Standards
W.6.3.aW.6.3.bW.6.3.d
Draft a clear and cohesive personal narrative by using pronouns in the correct case to refer to characters and ideas.
- TWGTB
- White Water
- Single Point Narrative Writing Rubric (G6, U1, L20)
- Narrative Graphic Organizer (G6–8)
- Sample Narrative Graphic Organizer (G6, U1, L20)
- Mentor Text Narrative Arc (G6, U1, L20)
- Pronouns Reference Sheet (G6–8)
Standards
L.6.1.aW.6.3.b
Revise the climax by adding descriptive details that build tension and reveal the narrator's thoughts, feelings, and actions.
- TWGTB
- White Water
- Narrative Graphic Organizer (G6–8)
Standards
W.6.3.bW.6.3.d
Revise the ending by adding the narrator's reflection on the importance or impact of the experience.
- TWGTB
- White Water
- Narrative Writing Rubric (G6)
- Single Point Narrative Writing Rubric (G6, U1, L20)
- Editing Checklist (G6–8)
Standards
W.6.3.dW.6.3.e
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