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Lesson Overview
Objective
Write a postscript for one's rewritten scene, provide feedback on a peer's writing, and then use peer feedback to improve one's own writing.
Readings and Materials
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Book: In the Time of Butterflies by Julia Alvarez — pp. 169–end
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Resource: Self/Peer Feedback Form (G9, U4, L24)
Lesson Map
Rewrite a pivotal scene from In the Time of the Butterflies from an alternate sister's perspective.
Brainstorm and plan to rewrite a scene from an alternate Mirabal sister's narrative point of view.
- Original Scene Close Reading Graphic Organizer (G9, U4, L14)
- Rewritten Scene Brainstorm Graphic Organizer (G9, U4, L14)
Standards
W.9-10.3W.9-10.5W.9-10.9
Develop a unique voice when rewriting a scene from another Mirabal sister's narrative point of view.
- Analyzing Narrative Voice in an Exemplar (G9, U4, L14)
Standards
W.9-10.3.aW.9-10.3.dW.9-10.5
Use similes as adverbial phrases to vividly describe actions and convey narrative voice.
Standards
L.9-10.1.bW.9-10.3.dW.9-10.5
Rewrite a pivotal scene from In the Time of the Butterflies from an alternate sister's perspective.
Brainstorm and plan a rewritten scene from an alternate Mirabal sister's narrative point of view.
- Original Scene Close Reading Graphic Organizer (G9, U4, L24)
- Rewritten Scene Brainstorm Graphic Organizer (G9, U4, L24)
- Self/Peer Feedback Form (G9, U4, L24)
Standards
W.9-10.3W.9-10.5W.9-10.9
Incorporate dialogue that reveals a character's emotions/motivations/values, unique narrative voice, or relationship with another character.
- Determining Dialogue in a Rewritten Scene (G9, U4, L24)
Standards
W.9-10.3.b
Revise a narrative scene by adding narration to balance dialogue and engage readers.
- Analyzing a Non-Exemplar (G9, U4, L24)
Standards
L.9-10.1.bW.9-10.3.bW.9-10.5
Write a postscript for one's rewritten scene, provide feedback on a peer's writing, and then use peer feedback to improve one's own writing.
- Self/Peer Feedback Form (G9, U4, L24)
- Guide to Effective Feedback Handout (G9–12)
Standards
L.9-10.1.bW.9-10.3W.9-10.4W.9-10.5